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The One Thing Every Scene Needs

(Originally published May 2, 2022)


Hey, storyteller!


How can you tell if a scene is “working?” We are often too close to our stories to know, or to figure out what to do about it.


If our scenes aren’t moving the plot forward and raising the tension, we risk losing our readers.


In this week’s writer coaching session, we’ll discuss the one thing all scenes need, and how to make each scene fit one of the two types guaranteed to keep readers engaged (proactive and reactive scenes).


I Have a Gift for You!

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An Excellent Resource

Some of the information in this video is based on concepts from Randy Ingermanson’s book How to Write a Dynamite Scene Using the Snowflake Method. Click here to check it out.

Video Timestamps

  • 0:01 Introduction
  • 0:58 A Gift for You
  • 1:43 Book Recommendation
  • 2:51 What scenes must do
  • 4:39 Proactive Scenes
  • 8:46 Proactive Scene Example
  • 12:47 Reactive Scenes
  • 16:29 Reactive Scene Example
  • 21:01 This Week’s Power-Up

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